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2009-10-12 - 11:57 p.m. this is the re-write i've come up with.... (tentatively titled): A Perfect Hug
i was inspired by Francis Ponge's "The Pleasures of the Door" and Julio Cortazar's "Instructions on How to Cry." Ponge's poem more from a descriptive point and Cortazar's from a narrative persepctive. i'm sure you could google both of them. it finally clicked on what i was supposed to do with this by talking to carlie about what was wrong with my other one. that one could make a decent short story if i really expanded on it i think, but this one captures the hug and only the hug a lot better. so, yeah, remember how i don't do transitions? alia's banging some 32 year old guy now. you know how i know this? because two sepparate girls told me that. seriously, like i wanted to know that in the first place? like i even wanted to know if she was dating anyone to begin with, and then you have to go and fucking tell me she's having sex with the guy too? does anyone else not remember how pissed off i was that she wouldn't put out at all? (well, except for that one time, but there was a lot of booze involved.) ugh... and both those stupid chicks were talking about it infront of me like it wasn't anything big. seriously wtf? granted i could've always said "i don't want to hear about it" but then i'd be a bitch. also... granted i am a bitch, but i don't want to come off as one. i fucking hate that chick (alia). i want my god damn day off already. tomorrow's gonna suck. i can feel it already.... � � |